"If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice."
There are many people around the world who would like to meet a popular famous figure. Some people would like to interview or talk with a famous politician, singer, or actress from their home country. Meanwhile, other people would like to encounter a historical figure who they are proud of. If I could go back in time, I would like to meet Alexander Hamilton.
To begin with, Alexander Hamilton was one of the founding fathers of the United States. After I saw the musical Hamilton, I became interested in his history. If I had a chance to meet Alexander Hamilton the first thing I would do is let him know how proud I am of him. He has been an inspirational figure to me after I learned about his history. Moreover, As a teenager, Alexander Hamilton emigrated to New York from the West British Indies. Furthermore, as an immigrant myself I can imagine how hard it was for Hamilton to adapt to a new culture in a developed country. Hamilton taught himself how to read and write when he was a child, and became a self-made man. He went on to become one of the richest and most influential men in America.
Secondly, through the years Hamilton became a strong supporter of the central government and a central bank. In fact, Hamilton created the US economic system, which is followed by most of the world today. Just like when Hamilton was a young immigrant, I am also interested in business and economics. The economic system that Hamilton founded provides opportunities for me to pursue my own businesses and success today.
Hamilton was a revolutionary in his time and fought for American independence on the battlefield. Just as importantly, he fought for his ideals his entire life, including ending slavery and social justice for all people. I also am committed to supporting social justice and civil rights today, such as through the Black Lives Matters movement, in which people are fighting for equal rights and to end discrimination. The fight for Hamilton’s ideas continues to this day and I am proud to be part of that fight.
Therefore, Hamilton is one person I would like to meet because he made revolutionary history in my new nation, where his impact is still felt today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as for, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67015706806 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65538981895 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497382198953 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 382.0 20.1344086022 1897% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1784.0 100.406767564 1777% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 382.0 20.6045352989 1854% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 126.0 5.45110844103 2311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142269412229 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142269412229 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990955294122 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886687064273 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 191.6 11.7677419355 1628% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -307.79 58.1214874552 -530% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 151.1 10.1575268817 1488% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.29 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.31 8.01818996416 316% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.002688172 570% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 154.8 10.0537634409 1540% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 155.0 10.247311828 1513% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.