People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Stress is one of our biggest enemies. It affects our health, our personality, and our relationships
with others. In order to get rid of stress, I first have to identify the cause. I have different antidotes
to stress depending on the cause. The most common types of stress I face are with work, with
friends, and with myself.
Work-related stress is the easiest to combat. I simply stop working for a while. If I find myself
picking up the same piece of paper four times a day and never doing anything with it, I blame
stress. If I find- myself staring at the computer without finishing a report, I blame stress. The best
thing to do is to do something else. Sometimes, I get up from my desk and go down the hall to talk
to my colleagues, but I don't talk about work related subjects. Other times, I will take a short walk
around the block and get some fresh air. Work-related stress can be cured by getting away from
the work.
Stress caused by friends is more difficult to cure. Often the cause is more complicated. My friends
could have a personal problem that causes them and me both anxiety. Or my friends could be
angry at me or vice versa. Here, the cure for stress is talking about the problem and being with my
friends. Unlike work, you can't walk away from your friends.
Stress I cause myself is also not so easy to get rid of. If I feel bothered by an exam or anxious
about the future, there is very little for me to do. I just have to tell myself that I can only do my
best and leave the rest up to fate.
It is important to try to lead a stress-free life. If you can avoid stress by walking away from it (like
at work), talking through it (like with your friends) or facing it head on (like with yourself), your
health, personality and relationships will benefit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 25, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e hall to talk to my colleagues, but I dont talk about work related subjects. Other...
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Line 17, column 27, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eing with my friends. Unlike work, you cant walk away from your friends. Stress ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, i feel, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41492537313 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39045402358 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0407755188 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.625 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9583333333 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.85842293907 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206532828596 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674461869007 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419239761166 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639592142745 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042687210124 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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