People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
A time of refreshment is necessary in the life of people facing the hectic shedule. Some people utilize their free time to do some recreational activities which can alleviate their stress to some extent. Personally, I prefer to use my free time to play a game for releasing stress as it is an excellent means to get entertainment, strengthing physical health and involve in the team play.
To begin, Playing a game entertain the person leaving all the stress behind. GAme generally, is engaging where person feel excitement and endulged within it. Energy of the perosn while playing a game moreover concentrating on the lose and win of the game and, end result in favor of them gives extra motivation. For instance, When I feel more stress in the study, usually, I play the Pub g in the mobile. During that time, I lost all my stress and have deep focus in the game. After accomplishing some mission, I feel I have done something good and feel very enthusiastic. Since game boost your confidence and release your lethargy, it is one of the best way to recharge you vigor.
Another reason for chosing a game is that it can strength our health. A game like football, cricket, badminton, etc; needs a lot of energy and physical workout and, by playing this kind of game, a body can burn our extra fat and body flexible makes healthy and fit. Furthermore, It is not vapid as other exercise cause people feel entertained during it.
Finally, a team game can improve your social skills as well. When participating in team game, people get interacted with each other; they will discuss the strategy for the game and share some quality talks. It not only helps them to make confident in team working but also release their mental stress by sharing their thoughts.
In conclusion, sports is a best way to release stress by getting entertainement, improving social skills and remaining fit in the same time. Perhaps, all people do not like this to release their stress as it is not appropriate things according to their personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78693181818 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69280869826 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536931818182 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4393461616 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6111111111 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226535879323 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763058712252 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647357398873 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135463852617 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599008915652 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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