Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The mistake is one of a great way of learning. Doing it a person can understand the experience of something and how to do next time error-free. However, committing mistakes often due to negligence and rushing fast things can be detrimental. Personally, I think it would be better for the person to make things perfect cautiously rather than committing a blunder in the hurried. I will prove my stand on why I chose a deliberate result oriented work in the following paragraphs.

First, despite the fast work is preferred, its urgency can consequent a tremendous financial loss. Generally, a person or organization has their limited budget to execute its business plan for the profit. In order to stay economically sound, they need to do some homework such as market analysis for a certain product, competitive good availability, consumer demand, and many more. Needless to say, this kind of information takes long time to generate though logically and practically advantageous for them. If person takes their decision on the basis of the mere information then there will be high chance of the business collapse.

Again, taking a rapid action puts pressure infinitely in the employee coercing them to unable to give their best. An exigent work is tempted to them to bear tension and anxiety surmount in the work environment. since they mentally occupied with the demanding work load, they cannot think wisely and unable to perform productive work. For instance, normally, I am a genuine employee giving my work performance satisfactorily in the construction company for preparing a budget plan. But, while I was in massive workload, I am unable to produce a similar output as before. It is usually happening in the end of the month where I have to perform massive work in the limited time. At that time I feel more terrified and in extreme case lose my cognizant. Consequently, sometimes my error is not mendable.

To wrap up, I reiterate that the perfect work by calmly is more paramount for the successful life in the current time as it secure our cash value and can extract valueable work from the worker.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e high chance of the business collapse. Again, taking a rapid action puts pressu...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...xiety surmount in the work environment. since they mentally occupied with the demandi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, i think, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96338028169 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88621758261 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602816901408 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8088183014 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7368421053 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148094742341 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418664722061 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364058328604 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897064967436 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309892513775 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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