Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debate between easy in educating past generation and now have been proved to be controversial. Nowadays, many people are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration in order to examine constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some people holds the view that people are in todays waste their time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website. however, I strongly disagree with statement and aver the points that people in this generation have greater previlege to get educated and education can be dessiminated smoothly as compared to past.
The first exquisite point to be included is that technology have ease out the education process. people can get education from online either formal and informal. Furthermore people have access to get education even from the place they have never seen in their life; online education have been popular in todays' generation where plethora of people learn new things. however, the situation had different in the past. Suffering from the basic needs and achievement of the advanced knowledge was arduous. As a result, many people, talented enough to undersatnd concept, succumbed to the hardship which had to bear to be elite. Moreover, literacy rate was way below than now.
Similarly, the technological advancement facilates the new innovative way to teach the people. Whole pedantic style have been changed from the earlier culture of education. people with different mental ability have opportunity with way from where they will learn efficiently; education system now approach strategy which is effective in teaching people. Practical approach, field learning and project learning, participating learning are few way, which are adopted by edcuational agency, makes education easy. On the other hand, people in the past learned from the one way approach where no one had gave preference to the people difficulties; those who undersatnd the method learned the things while for other, the education and content seemed mistery. Thus, in contemporary education is way better expressive to people than in past.
Furthermore, the other good aspects of the technology is that it helps the people who want to learn in snap of the time. people take help form the internet to learn the things. it will be useful to all kinds of people; even the people with shy attitude can learn without hesitation and embarrassments. By this way education procedure becomes more swift and easy for all people. In contrast, most of the people in the past would let the things go if they had not comprehend the subject. this again prop the position that todays' education is less difficult than previous year.
To sum up, aforementioned reasons prove that the education is way easier todays' before it due to more advancement in the technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, while, in contrast, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2731277533 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7563260947 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52422907489 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6572770905 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164364556036 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053065365928 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475107860807 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106836904206 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316072915255 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.