TPO 41. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Teacher is the most reputed profession since the ancient time and their contribution in the society is massive to make people enlighten and knowledgable. However, it is seen that people are unwilling to pay the respect at that extent as it was considered in the past. In my opinion, this profession losing its appreciation and value because of the two reasons in the contemporary moment due to two reasons which I explore in the following paragraphs.
First, there were considerably less number of educated people in the past so people instantly impressed by their work. In the current time, education pervade the whole world, many people are economically, intellectually and socially feel the same standard as the fellow teacher. In contrast, the people were naive and less educated and maintained no class.
Second, teaching institution were in the past were service oriented and society naturally showed them their gratitude. They prioritized the education for the society welfare. However, the things is quite opposite at this time. the education system is run like the business institution which barely give the importance on social development and focus more in the return. That's why they get unable to get the same respect as the previous education instituiton that were run to brighten intellectual level of the people.
To wrap up, I think that we give less homage to the instructor as they were received in the past. This is because of their money oriented custom currently and there is development of the congnizant in the people to see them as equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, i think, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 258.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83201540945 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6346871769 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195663769008 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693475683919 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529899756862 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11337185392 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321710603777 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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