To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In today's Contemporary and fast paced world, each country's major cities play a very important role in
deciding the economic, social as well as political status of a country. The major cities reflect upon the
overall development and provide a bird's view of that country. However, this is an unfair generalization
made by the author that looking into the major cities will give us all the important characteristics of a
society. Let’s further look into this.
For decades, a country has been divided into two fragments. Firstly, the major cities where
Urbanization and development have taken at a faster pace. Secondly the towns and rural areas of the
country which provide a closer look into the cultural heritage.
The major cities have helped in establishing international standards and maintaining the
foreign relations. Every major city of any country will always have the best amenities and
and facilities be it New Delhi in India, Paris in France or Beijing in China.
However these cities may provide some insight into the culture and traditions of
that country ,their socioeconomic status and the way their society functions but
will not give a holistic picture. Due to Commercialization and the growing needs of each city to
compete with each other in the race of being the best, they somewhat are not capable of
capturing the true essence of their society and the bucolic beauty of that nation.
For instance, to know about the cultural and traditional background of India, looking
into their major cities will only provide an overview. Metropolitan cities like Delhi,
Bangalore etc have very less to offer in terms of India's history
of culture and traditions. To truly understand their society and background,
it is necessary to visit the countryside or further explore some other cities
to learn about their culture, heritage and past.
Another popular example is Paris in France. Paris is no doubt the fashion hub of the country
and has some widely popular tourist attractions but looking alone into Paris would not give
enough information about entire France like their major contribution in
Cheese production, wine and vineyards, perfumes etc. For that it is necessary to look
into the small villages and towns and not just the major cities.
Major cities will always provide information and various important characteristics of a
society. However, one can truly know about a country's culture and society by studying
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27455919395 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75438704082 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506297229219 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.467420373 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.210526316 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.97078651685 583% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239647142498 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798622932202 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632040080121 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632220932618 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695368752276 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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