Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debate between whether people in past were more satisfied or the people in present has been proven to be controversial. Some people hold the view that people in past were more happy as they did not have to face much competition like now; moreover, they had mor personal time and may had enjoyed the pristine condition. however, other may hold the opposite view. From my vantage point, I agree with the latter opinion and aver that present people enjoy more life because people in today have much more facilities making their life utopian.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that technological advancement makes the life of the people less arduous. In fact, they enjoy the technological advancement with less physical pain. moreover, they spend most of the time with rejoicing activities like travelling, playing, watching movies, etc. On the other hand, people in the past had to all the work manually. Entire life they have to live with difficulty both physically and mentally and pleasure remained ambiguous for most of the people. For instance, my grandfather used to say that how miserable in his time; waking up early in the morning, travelling miles only for the simple task, and nothing special tasty food to eat. By comparing today's situation, he was more satisfied; less physical work, new items to eat and many more recreational activities to enjoy in free time. This signifies how people were not satisfied with their life in the past and ongoing change makes them more entertaining.
Second, people now have less misery and threatening life than earlier time. The world crime had been come to seized. people do not have to live in threat whether they will survive or not from invasion. In contrast, in past world was involved in the war. Feminine had been picked so that many people had to suffer the malnutrition and die out. As a result, basic life was dilapidated and bleak so far from satisfaction.
Finally, people now are blessed with advanced medical innovation. Unlike in the past, they do not have to bear pain that much. From the surgical to cure severe disease, scientist have figure out the way. however, in the past, many people had to suffer the pain and passed away from the simple disease. my grandfather was passed away due to tuberculosis. In that time, the disease was in pick and many people lost their life from it. now situation has changed completely, people are gifted with a lot of medical invention; as a result, the people have less untimely death.
To wrap up, contemplating all the above reasons, once can soon realize how enjoyable the present situation and how hard to live in th past due to social instability and no scientific revolution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for instance, in contrast, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92407809111 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57472491883 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505422993492 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.766146786 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7307692308 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295609779654 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888678541419 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067842437148 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164976497912 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066888940723 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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