"People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer."
In life to be prepared, and to acquire knowledge at the young age is fundamental for the days yet to come. The major reason why people feel attracted by college is for career preparation. In the process of learning the skills that your career required people also acquired more education, experiences, and gained friends.
In the first place if you have chosen a career. The university teaches specific techniques for a particular subject, helps you to grow up, and be more self-aware, also teaches responsibilities and remains organized in order to live more independently. For instance, if you want to study international business management the university teaches you basic education within the international context, moreover the university is in charge of instructing you in the necessary abilities on building your business knowledge such: leadership, problem solving, strategic thinking, decision making, and so on. These main proficiencies are fundamental to running any business.
On the other hand, many people think that there is no time to study that there are so many other important things that we should take care of. Also, having a degree does not mean that you would be successful because they think that is so many years of studying, and it costs plenty of money, and there is no guarantee that you would find a job once you finished your studies. I believe that the sooner you get started on working toward your degree the better. Not only but also when the time has passed and you have not started you feel guilty and wishing that you should have started 5 years ago. Even if at the beginning it seems hard you need to make commitments to your studying preparation, nowadays there are many options on how to get on if you cannot study full time, then choose to part-time the path will be longer, however you are in the right direction. Choosing the correct university that suits your needs is relevant, in order to get your prize.
All in all people attend college to be prepared for the future, including long term financial gain, career satisfaction, seeing that higher occupation requires advanced education. If you have studied your passion, the degree can also boost your happiness in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 766, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ns on how to get on if you cannot study full time, then choose to part-time the path will...
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Line 8, column 161, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires advanced" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'advancing' or 'to be advanced'.
Suggestion: advancing; to be advanced
... seeing that higher occupation requires advanced education. If you have studied your pas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98655913978 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7435307925 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551075268817 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.6487327247 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285148771789 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096725134079 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712295481368 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182079539533 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398608483543 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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