Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be selfemployed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
Running own business has a myriad advantages, such as self-management or indepencency from others. However, I personally prefer to work for someone else. The reasons I hold this stance will be elaborated in the paragraphs below.
One of the reasons is that working for an employer saves time. People, who run their own business have tremendous amout of responsibilities in front of empoyees and partners. Moreover, it takes enormous amount of time to launch the business and keep evilvong it. From the other hand, if the person works for a company, he is on clock, which means that the individual has to work just certain amount of hours and do not stay over time to accomplish his duty. The time left the person can devote to his family and activities he is enjoing to do. Despite on humans` opinion that working for themselves gives them freedom, they are very tightly bound with liabilities in front of others. To that end, working for a company enables people to spend more time with their beloved ones.
Another reason is that enroling to a big company gives feasibility to gain career growth. Nowadays, modern businesses have scores of branches with a variety of the posinions. Plus, big companies provides regular treinings for their employees. Therefore, in such as companies, even people without college degree enable to find a position they would like to attend and developing their knowledge in the field. When an individual runs his own business, very often he has no free time to attend different kind of conferences and educational events. So, people who work for large company has a chance to move through ranks of the company and excel.
To recapitulate, I feel that working for an employer is advantageous. This is because it gives more free time and helpes to succeed in life. All things considered, it is reasonable to assume that working for someone else is benefitial for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reason is that enroling to a big company gives feasibility to gain career growth....
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Suggestion:
... someone else is benefitial for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, i feel, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9347826087 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77208142014 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574534161491 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.755866574 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6315789474 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382667351419 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120666475099 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109485210054 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249316514859 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500885852144 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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