What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

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What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

These days people spend a tremendous amount of time at a workplace and their satisfaction with a work process mainly depends on the attitude of their managers. Personally, I think that the essential characteristics of a great supervisor are his experience and his professionalism. There are a few reasons why I hold this opinion.
First of all, employees can learn a lot from their experienced bosses. A knowledgeable individual who leads a team provides incredible help for inexperienced workers. This kind of person is able to teach them important features of their jobs and give them a myriad of tips which he learned from his own practice. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Right after a graduation of a pharmaceutical college, I started working as a pharmacist in a local pharmacy. At that moment, I thought that I knew enough about my job, but I was underestimating my abilities and faced a few negative situations with customers, and I did not know how to resolve them correctly. My supervisor, who worked for the pharmacy for many years took time and explained to me how to deal with angry and inpatient patients. He told me a myriad of stories from her own experience and showed me how to behave in difficult work circumstances. As a result, from him, I learned how to behave with complicated customers and made them live the pharmacy in a positive mood, and continue using our services.
Secondly, professionalism of a boss contributes to the success of all team since people tend to imitate their supervisors` work style. Indeed, when a manager cheers his workers, treats all of them in the same way, and maintains positive work environment, employees prone to follow this attitude because it makes a work routine more pleasant and less stressful. For instance, when my head pharmacist endorses his technicians` works results and praises them for a nice job, they feel encouraged and strive to perform their duty in the best way, even during incredibly busy and overwhelming days. Moreover, my boss is always on time and never gossips about his teammates, so all employees follow his example. In this way, everyone in the pharmacy goes to work with pleasure and our team shows best results in a company.
To conclude, I strongly believe that having long work experience and professionalism are the most significant qualities of an excellent leader. This is because it helps employees to develop intellectually, enjoy their work and accomplish their tasks effectively.

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...and accomplish their tasks effectively.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, first of all, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02158273381 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1853221537 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549160671463 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7380952223 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.210526316 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0670386905405 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229005579329 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244716362817 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441501593246 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117736614067 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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