What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
A supervisor is the person responsible for overseeing some parts of a company. These may be the human resources, logistical, financial department among others. Even sometimes, a supervisor is the director of a company. He/she needs to direct tasks to employees to be accomplished according to the sectors deadlines.
Firstly, he ought to be able to deal with people, what it is actually one of the hardest part of any bosses' duties. For instance, he cannot be rude but he cannot be easygoing alike. Maybe, he could be evenhanded because this way his employees could not take advantage on him and try to pull his legs at work. A friend of mine faced this hindrance once and then he ended up losing the job.
Secondly, he needs to be a good listener and advisor. For example, in every company everybody needs help. It may be simple ones however, it can be hardest ones. The boss should be ready to advocate them the better pattern to choose or the better way to solve a specific drawback. Even when we are having hard times in our private life, he should fathom it and give us extra time to solve our problems. Soever, we will work more efficiently out of hindrances.
Thirdly, a good boss may be able to delegate the right task to the right person. As an example, when I started working, I knew only about one subject but my boss wanted that I worked in many different areas. I told him about my resumé but he spoke to me that I should start learning new things in my new job. thankfully, in only two month I learned what he has been teaching me so far and then I could corroborate for the company profits.
Finally, a good boss has to provide endurancement and all sort of help that his employees need to accomplish tasks properly and safely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sectors'' or 'sector's'?
Suggestion: sectors'; sector's
...ees to be accomplished according to the sectors deadlines. Firstly, he ought to be ab...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the hardest'.
Suggestion: be the hardest
.... It may be simple ones however, it can be hardest ones. The boss should be ready to advoc...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: WANT_THAT_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wanted me to'?
Suggestion: wanted me to
...knew only about one subject but my boss wanted that I worked in many different areas. I told ...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ect but my boss wanted that I worked in many different areas. I told him about my resumé but h...
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Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thankfully
...tart learning new things in my new job. thankfully, in only two month I learned what he ha...
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Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... in my new job. thankfully, in only two month I learned what he has been teaching me ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, even so, for example, for instance, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5141955836 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59410357624 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580441640379 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1228175861 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.3157894737 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828384439018 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293780822878 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031035345823 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532380666262 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198891660873 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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