Some people like to record their life by sharing pictures and other information on social-networking sites. Others keep this information to themselves and never share it online. Which do you prefer?
Social network has become a pivotal part of our daily life in recent years. An increasingly number of people stick themselves on Facebook and other social-networking sites in their spare time. The sharing function of these sites has caused wide public concern. Some individuals prefer to share photos and other information online, while others are not so willing to upload anything or click the "share" button on their social networks. From my standpoint, I prefer to share my daily life and other potentially useful information with my friends on social-networking sites based on several reasons below.
To begin with, sharing pictures and other useful information could strengthen our relationship with friends and even make some new friends. That is to say, by interacting with friends online, we could get to know more about each other. Take my best friend Chris as an example, our friendship began on Facebook. Three years ago, I first met him in our high school and became friends on Facebook. One day, I uploaded a photo showed that I was play soccer and he noticed and replied that he enjoyed playing soccer, too. From then on, we often play soccer together in school and now he is my best friend. That is to say, our new friends will know our hobbies and interests if we share photos on social networks and we may find plenty of friends who share the same hobbies with us, which is definitely easier than waiting for others' notice in the daily life. In brief, sharing photos could accelerate the process of making new friends.
In addition, sharing photos and other information could help us memorize our life permanently. To be more specific, we can get access to our sharing history on these social-networking sites so that we could browse photos uploaded at any particular time as we wish, which could be full of joy. Imagine that, if we could see our photos and status at five years or even longer ago, we may laugh out because of these best memories. If we did not upload these photos to social networks five years ago, we may have a hard time to figure out what happened and what were we thinking at that time. Needless to say, saving our photos on these social networks is the most convenient method to record our meaningful moments, permanently.
Moreover, we could acquire encouragement and happiness by sharing photos and moments on social networks. To specify, when we get trapped by some trouble or are in a bad mood for some reason, we could get encouragement by sharing our feelings to our friends on the social networks. Sometimes, we could even obtain a useful solution from our friends and overcome the difficulties. On the other hand, we can share our happiest moments with our friends on these sites and spread our great emotions to make more people cheerful. In this way, everyone could get out of his or her bad mood and become positive to this splendid world.
Judging from all the situations and examples mentioned above, we might easily find that sharing photos and other information could benefit our even others life. Absolutely, I prefer to record my daily life on the social-networking sites.
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I believe it ultimately…
I believe it ultimately comes down to personal preference. Sharing moments of your life on social networking sites can be a great way to connect with friends and family, document memories, and even inspire others. However, it's crucial to strike a balance and be mindful of privacy and security concerns. Some may visit the review reading find solace in keeping their life experiences private, which is entirely valid too. The key is to make choices that align with your values and comfort level in this digital age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('increasingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('number') instead of another adjective.
...part of our daily life in recent years. An increasingly number of people stick themselves on Facebook ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, in addition, in brief, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2614.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85873605948 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71039156076 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447955390335 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.0 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9417718422 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.56 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.52 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283203838834 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102435314605 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885343385426 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216568052872 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112438014126 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.