Nowadays, the widespread use of internet has changed many aspects of human beings' lives. Today people spend a great deal of time on social media to keep in touch with their friends, be aware of the news, follow celebrities, to name but a few. In this regard, some people prefer to share their experiences and pictures on social networking sites, while others do not like to do so. Personally speaking, I prefer to keep a record of my own experiences on social media as it broadens my cennection connection with people and also, helsp helps me to express my feelings and address my problems through difficulties of life. My reasons are explained in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, sharing my experiences leads me to find people who have the same interests as I have. Sometimes it seems hard to find someone in the university or work place has the exact favorites as I have. However, social networking sites are the best platforms to share ideas and make friends. My own experience could better clarify this idea. When I was a student, I used to go climbing with one of my friends on weekends. We liked to make a group to go mountain climbing and camp there for at least one night, but, unfortunately, we could not find anyone to join us, until my friend write about one of our climbing story on his Facebook account, upload some of amazing photos, which we had taken, and asked students to join us if they have appetite. Surprisingly, many students commented that they were looking for someone to accompany them to go climbing. If my friend did not have shared our experience, we could not find anyone to make a climbing mountain team.
Secondly, in virtual platforms people speak about their emotional feelings and problems more easily, thereby they could get help from people who had the same experience. Today, people from all different walks of life are active in social networking sites that could assist each other to deal with obstacles through advising and counseling. Although, sometimes this might make people to walk on the wrong track, most of the time its benefits outweigh the drawbacks. For example, people who feel depressed because of losing the job or getting divorced, have opportunity to speak about their emotional senses on social applications. There are many people who have encountered such problems, consequently, they will talk to them and try to help them to recover.
In a word, I prefer to share my experiences on social networks. I think, it not only will broaden my relationships with various people, but also aids me to express my feelings and get advice from others to deal with my issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81938325991 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66241526527 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515418502203 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0764192196 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228957484165 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776164166594 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101663919483 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14558407984 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715655744591 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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