regarding the fact that people are livig in the modern social life, social media and other social network play a pivotal role among people to access to new data. In other words, people who want to know about each other and have easy access to their news can use the social media. Accordingly, some people assume that social media is not safe place to share the privet information. However, others deisagree. As far as I am concern, one of the certain role of social media could be the way that people know about each other. I feel this way for two reasones which I will explore in the following essay.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that, as people are living in the hectic daily life scadule, there is no enough time to visit each other and scajual with the detail plan to see each of their friends and family. Therefore by sharing the pictures of the memory you can send a hint to your friends and make distance connection.Take my personal experience as a compelling example. I had been strugling in executing a new and areduse project in buliding company which did not let us to heve more than litle free time. What was relly obvios was that I liked to share my event with my friiend s and family that were live far from me and the only free means to share the memory was to taking photo and share my memory with them through the social media tools. This example clearly illustrates that how the social media like instogram could be usefull for people to share their memory and access to each other in the far distances.
Seconed cricial role that uploding a photo on the social media could reperesents is that, the photo can save as a golory and the memory can gathered and collect in a virtual space that the access to them are available every time that you want. The example of my own experienc exemplifies the correctness of this truth. I had uploded the photoes of my special and memorial event on the privte page on instogrames wall. What is surprisigly shows is that after several years that you pass lots of events I had a collected of my photoes in a subjective albume on instograme's wall. By using this method I could have all my memorial events simultaniosly in a virtual space which have take minscle space on your mobile phone.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that uploading the photoes on social media, not only does make the access for friends to commiunicate with each other and invent a pvirtual plac eto know about each others, but also creat a collection of photoes that mis very easy to have access to them.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regarding
regarding the fact that people are livig in the m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...o see each of their friends and family. Therefore by sharing the pictures of the memory y...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Take
...ur friends and make distance connection.Take my personal experience as a compelling ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ltaniosly in a virtual space which have take minscle space on your mobile phone. In...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, as to, i feel, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49892008639 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33925739656 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479481641469 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0550258193 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.529411765 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2352941176 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240715319878 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880807822013 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631238367302 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144137683429 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100179402274 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regarding
regarding the fact that people are livig in the m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...o see each of their friends and family. Therefore by sharing the pictures of the memory y...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Take
...ur friends and make distance connection.Take my personal experience as a compelling ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ltaniosly in a virtual space which have take minscle space on your mobile phone. In...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, as to, i feel, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49892008639 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33925739656 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479481641469 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0550258193 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.529411765 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2352941176 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240715319878 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880807822013 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631238367302 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144137683429 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100179402274 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.