Different type of tasks plays pivotal roll in workers' level of satisfaction. Some people believe that the more different types of tasks, the more levels up satisfactory. However, others disagree. In my opinion, various types of duties do positively impact on job satisfaction. I feel this way for tow reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First, multi types of tasks help workers feel useful. When you do variety of job descriptions feel less boring rather than doing similar tasks in a daily basis. one of my friend's experience is a good case in point. she has worked in a computer company as an expert two years ago. She had only one task to do all day long, which gave him sense of being useless therefore she resigned her job and cooperated with new firm where had to do wide variety of responsibility. This circumstances made her feel more useful and satisfied about her new position. this example clearly illustrates to me that handling different types of tasks really does give sense of being useful for employers.
Second, more than one responsibility gives workers a great chance to gain different experiences. If you, carry out only one duty you limited your chance to develop your experience in other fields. For instance, I have recently read an article about this issue which indicated people who have just one responsibility couldn't develop their experience and feel less satisfied from their job. However, employees who do various tasks feel happier because of gaining different experiences during their work. As you see in this research, the increase of multi experiences do strongly impact work forces satisfaction and work quality.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that working with different activities would cause employee feel satisfied due to two reasons. It not only creates sense of being useful in workers but also gives them the chance to develop new experiences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05396825397 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75723743567 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568253968254 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9408735209 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7894736842 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255938581612 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712620265507 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058596460839 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14843997721 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373752432984 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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