Some people like to save extra money. Other people prefer to spend it right away. Which do you prefer to do?
Do you prefer to spend extra money immediately or save it? different people will give different responses from their own purposes in their life,their concerns and even their life’s situation. However, when it comes to me, I would rather save extra money. In this essay, I will provide some reasons and explanations as to why I believe this way.
First and foremost, nowadays, people confront many proplems in their life and have different needs so that the most of them can be solvedby money. As we know, nobody can not tell you about future and all predicaments may occur, in addition, everyone knows that future needs and desires can not be foretold. due to this reason, saving extra money can be a remedy when someone is in a dillema. My own experience is a good example of this. When I was in high school, I got used to saving a monthly allowance which my parents gave me. I didn’t think that a day, this small amount of money which I saved monthly, could be a positive and helpful impact on my life. the days passed till I got admission in university and I had to leave my home and go another city, far from my home, for pursuing my education and purpose. in that condition I perceived that money can paly an efficacious function in my life, especially, when your are far away from your family and nobody aroud you is not dependable. I reached the conclusion that saving extra money make a person independed of somepeople whom you do not beg for financial aid. on the other hand, I was in urgent need of cellphone and I bought it using the money which I had saved from my allowances before. My own experience clearly demonstrates that saving extara money can be a cure for vicissitudes of life.
My second reason for believing this is that saving extra money gradually bring about a great deal of money and you can spend and use it for bigger works and greater entertainments. doing great works such asestablishing a company, providing the tuition fees of a university,
travelling abroad and buying a car needs a lot of money. Therefore, if you save extra money during several years, you can reach enough money to follow your wishes and intentions without any problem. For instance, I had two friends in university who worked in a company during their education. one of them, named asad, saved his extra mony from monthly pay and another, named hassan, spent his money instantly by buying unnecessay stuff. When asad graduated, he could found a company with self investment from extra money which saved during his job and could employ many persons and currently, he is in a good financial situation and take pleasure. In contarst, Hassan still works in that company and could not make occupations. For this reason, spendingextra money may bring about immediate enjoyment, nevertheless savingextra money over times can provide a financial source in order to do greater and more effective works and That’s why I prefer saving my extra money.
All in all, I stronly agree with saving extra money is better than spending it right away. This is because saving extra money is vey fruitfuland useful in a dillema and urgent situation, and because it creates an enough financial support for making and doing great aims and intentions.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209119496855 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.158805031447 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0974842767296 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0455974842767 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0943396226415 0.0685040099705 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.106918238994 0.118717715034 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0408805031447 0.0351676179071 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65352977382 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0125786163522 0.0309702414327 41% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00157232704403 0.00188951952338 83% => OK
Determiners: 0.0707547169811 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0283018867925 0.0209618222197 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0204402515723 0.0139019557991 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3270.0 2387.08602151 137% => OK
No of words: 564.0 408.028673835 138% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79787234043 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310283687943 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212765957447 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150709219858 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120567375887 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65352977382 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496453900709 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 60.4232519725 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.56 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6143353343 48.84282405 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.56 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.8365957447 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.19473684211 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220108987339 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0893136643689 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0568347462538 0.0752933317313 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462906272827 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136514939533 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906085778857 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11244217508 0.0781384742642 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33784302741 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0446018190235 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155390509663 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094050734515 0.0618886996521 152% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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