As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The world is enlarging and everyday witnesses a new technology in a specific realm of sciences. Nowadays, the things which have been a dream before are affordable, meanwhile, mostcumbersome tasks have become facile. Currently, diverse satellites launched by NASA and Europian Space Agency can detect fluctuations of the Earth’s surface and even ferret out the variations of disparate layers of the Erath like crust and mantle. Using global navigation satellite systems, the position of each object on the earth is determinable with high accuracy and precision, in addition, utilizing these systems in automobiles has occasioned a revolution in driving and has devised unmanned cars. This statement asserts that the technology decays the thinking ability of humans and impairs the innovative mind. My argument for this point are listedas follows.
The technology is attained by humans’ mind and burgeon using the ingenuity. All archaic Insuperable complications in human history are remedied by reflection and intelligence. As witnessed by transportation system. Before industry revolution and inventing vehicals, people had to peregrinate highly long distances to arrive at their destinations. Quite the contrary, nowadays people voyage and travel to eveywhere they wish expeditiously and merely by a passport and a ticket. A plethora of transportation systems, either terrestrial and subterranean vehicals or space shuttles, are excogitated , therefore, people can reach distant places and ascertain new strike and discovery. Admittedly, technology facilitates our lives and enriches our jobs; however, this fact does not point at the suggestion made in the statement that technology impoverish our thinking ability. On the other hand, using technology requires competents and knowlwdge, as is made evident by a computer technology and programming software. Currently,computers is ubiquitous and eveyone approximately consummates the jobs and works by them. Using computers not only is merely a few clicks but also needs to delve into distinct parts of them and master in order to execute our tasks. additionally, using programming software, developed by various companies, warrants impeccable knowledge of programming skill and distinct reflection.
Moreover, each new technology is accompanied by various problems and issues. As evidenced by urban transportation systems such as automobiles. it is obvious that automobiles are highly worthwhile and ease our commute, nevertheless, this industry induce profuse problems and subjects for big towns and cities as well as setting and environment. Several problems like traffic jam, pollution, disease and a very cotroversial issue viz global warming. Currently a throng of individuals from politicians to scientists and researchers strive to cure thesecomplications and ameliorate the life level. Thus, these alternations necessitate innovation, ingenuity and enhancing the knowledge levels and competents. this fact bring about hope rate of people to the future and escalation of their motivation to work and study harder, without reservation since they intend to succeed in this competitive world.
In summary, given the facts I have just oulined, technology prompt not only ease of life but also an ingenious mind. Science and technology are advancing everyday, furthermore people confront a wide spectrum of issues and plights. Due to that fact, technology is a cardinal requisite to handle the problems and each technology results in a new and sophisticated one which warranta higher skill and more complicated knowledge. To put it briefly, each individual should learn and realize various facets of sciences to battle for the dilemmas and succeed
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'briefly', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in summary', 'such as', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.29307568438 0.240241500013 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.148148148148 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.085346215781 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0499194847021 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.024154589372 0.0444667217837 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0982286634461 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0499194847021 0.0406280797675 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.24190084731 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225442834138 0.030933414821 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00161030595813 0.0016655270985 97% => OK
Determiners: 0.0837359098229 0.0997080785238 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0048309178744 0.0249443105267 19% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00322061191626 0.0148568991511 22% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3737.0 2732.02544248 137% => OK
No of words: 552.0 452.878318584 122% => OK
Chars per words: 6.76992753623 6.0361032391 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.458333333333 0.366273622748 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.373188405797 0.280924506359 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.30615942029 0.200843997647 152% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.221014492754 0.132149295362 167% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24190084731 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 219.290929204 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 78.8021573869 55.4138127331 142% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7142857143 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.784618215 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.464285714 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.674092028746 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 57.033126294 51.4728631049 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.98550724638 1.64882698954 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36607452111 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0729019770342 0.123202303941 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0528546251264 0.077325440228 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.44852476615 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141319735583 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120980634907 0.161403998019 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641785215037 0.0892212321368 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.500456470122 0.385218514788 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0338317177386 0.0692045440612 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27231341415 0.275328986314 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427490148123 0.0653680567796 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.5995575221 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.