Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a doubt, the advent of computers was the milestone of the modern era. Although everybody agrees that computers have revolutionized every aspect of people's lives, there is a debate about whether this revolution has been positive or not. I am of the opinion that computers have made a great contribution to our life and I will elaborate more on my viewpoint through the following paragraphs.
First of all, computers have assumed many arduous toils that humans used to undergo in the past. In fact, nowadays many productive operations or calculations are done by computers. This has led to a higher quality of life for all people around the world and enabled us to prevent mental and physical health problems brought about by work-related pressures. For instance, imagine the production process in a chair factory. Not only the shape and size of the chair can be designed by computer programs such as AutoCAD, but also smart CNC machines facilitate the process of manufacture through pre-programmed operations. A chair can be produced without any handwork and with high precision. However, making the same product without the help of such facilities required a great deal of work and a large amount of time. This can be generalized to every product that we consume today, from agricultural to industrial. People who had had demanding jobs in the past would develop adverse illnesses, which is quite rare nowadays, thanks to computers and advances in technology. That is why I believe the computer is a spectacular invention of humankind.
Second, computers have developed our intellectual abilities, such that every generation is more intelligent than its previous one. Many children learn to work with smart facilities such as smartphones, even before they learn to walk. This will form more connections between their brain cells and develop a cleverer generation of humankind. Take my own experience as an example. I am twenty years old and my sister is eight years younger than I. At first glance one may think that I have more computer-related skills than she does. However, despite the fact that we did not take any computer classes, she is more competent when it comes to working with the new technology. She and others of her age have a lot more talent in working with computers. One can conclude that the younger the children get to work with computers the more possible it is for them to develop their intellectual and computer-related skills.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that nowadays computers are a blessing to people. This is because, computers have eliminated many demanding jobs and increased the quality of life for people around the world, and because computers have led to a more intelligent generation and improved people's intellectual abilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 924, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
... agricultural to industrial. People who had had demanding jobs in the past would develo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11403508772 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93290887133 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524122807018 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8884699647 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265455477031 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718170381125 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737380733106 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194927772421 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668004302379 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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