Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays computers are penetrating more and more in our life. Some people think that these technologies make our lifetime more suitable and comfortable, others believe that all of these led to difficulties, stresses and nerves. I agree with the first statement as I could not imagine my life without computers.
In my opinion, a computer is an irreplaceable thing in our world because it automates many processes, connecting with people`s life. For example, there are a lot of softwares for variety spheres of live starting from cooking in a kitchen to a space production, which give people possibility to save time that they might spend doing others things: reading, watching TV or playing with children. Moreover, computer progress makes people to create new professions in order to control and operate all these devices. Besides, people are becoming more and more educated as they have possibilities and sources to obtain the information and to study that they really want. For instance, on the Internet we might find a lot of books, useful videos or classic music, thus we could broaden our mind more effective.
On the other hand, computer progress destroys some professions, for example, drivers or telephone operators, because new computer systems could do a work which was performed earlier by the person. That is why there are some people who find these changes stressful as they had to adopt to new rules and to exit from the comfort zone to which they get used. What is more, it is considered that computers penetrate in our life injuring our right for privacy and depriving our freedom.
Having weighed up all pros and cons, I have arrived to the conclusion that we need in computers and all these penetration are necessary payment in order to make our life not only easier but also more safety
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
... these changes stressful as they had to adopt to new rules and to exit from the comfort ...
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...exit from the comfort zone to which they get used. What is more, it is considered...
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'this penetration' or 'these penetrations'?
Suggestion: this penetration; these penetrations
...usion that we need in computers and all these penetration are necessary payment in order to make ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99671052632 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70614546013 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8279739995 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.583333333 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272913547556 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112355749211 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628279030151 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184282351365 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199310312797 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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