Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is considered by some people that older people relish life less than the young. I absolutely disagree with this opinion. To my mind, older people have much more possibilities to enjoy the life in contrast to young people.
First of all, older people usually have enough money due to the fact that they worked during their life and climbed the career ladder and they are retired. Consequently, they have opportunities to spend money and time for doing whatever they want. In order to prove my opinion, I would like to recall my granny who has been working for 50 years in the factory and has retired as a director this factory. Now she has a lot of money which she spends visiting different theaters and buying old books of famous authors such as Tolstoy and Chekov as she is fond of reading.
Secondly, older people have much not only money, but also time, thus they do not need to hurry anywhere and can enjoy of life. The lifestyle of a granny of my friend Alex is a compelling example of this. She worked as a vet during her life, but she did not have enough time to care about everybody animal which she had to treat. After her retiring she opened an animal shelter and spent all her spare time there helping forsaken and lonely animals.
Finally, speaking about motivation, the older people have much it than the young people because they understand that sometimes wrong decisions were taken by them, and now the older people try to do all that they have not done during the life such as traveling, living in other countries or being close to family. In addition, such people realize lack of life time, that is why every minute is valuable and they try to enjoy whatever they really like and love.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that having much time and money, motivation - that is what makes older people to enjoy life more than young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, speaking about, such as, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61561561562 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24591014381 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528528528529 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9012248126 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.45110844103 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264498436902 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111911426596 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989068785201 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193903309884 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103707506497 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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