Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Nowadays people are tent to be more and more influenced by someone than they used to be decades ago. It is considered by some individuals that teachers and tutors effect more students that their friends. I absolutely agree with this opinion proceeding from the bellow mentioned reasons.
First of all, a teacher or a tutor can become as a personal example for a student and motivate him to work harder and not to give up. What I mean is that a story of a teacher's life may help students to overcome same problems which they have now or will have in the future. For example, I wanted to start my own business in Russia, but I remember that it is quite difficult to do it in my country and sometimes it leads for a long time. I recall the story of my professor who gave me some pieces of advice how not to make mistakes and to open own company from the first attempt. Consequently, being personal example for a student is the first reason.
Secondly, teachers often have huge life experience which consists of right and wrong decisions. In other words, students tent to trust more their teachers than their friends. When I set up my own firm, I need to find a good way to cut fees and taxes. The friends of mine offered me only illegal methods. Fortunately for me, I remember about a loophole in the law, about which my professor spoke on lectures. Thus, experience of life is the second reason.
The last, but not the least, teachers, in contrast to some friends, always wish good and happiness for their students 252. To be more specific, I would like to recollect my first summer job as a part of my education program. My professor Barron hired me in his IT company, while all my groupmates "worked" on a factory of my former friend who believed that an excellent pupil does not earn simply and light work. Thereby, pure and disinterested intentions are the third reason.
To sum up, teachers plays special and essential role in people's life, hence, students are more affected by them than by someone else.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...ve up. What I mean is that a story of a teachers life may help students to overcome same...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... My professor Barron hired me in his IT company, while all my groupmates 'worked&a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thus, while, for example, i mean, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59779614325 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60530627001 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556473829201 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9709029875 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8421052632 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219434956589 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703183445583 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754138472095 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127703975273 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734435046758 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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