Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Nowadays clothes are becoming more and more essential in our lives than they used to be decades or centuries ago. It is considered by some individuals that behavior of people depends on what they wear. I absolutely agree with this point of view proceeding from the below mentioned reasons.
First of all, clothes and their style restrict person's freedom, their expression and type of speech. What I mean is that people are affected by dress obligating them to control themselves since social norms require it. By the way, scientists use a special term for such situations which is defined as societal expectation. For example, if people look at someone who is dressed in classical style, they will believe that they must be polite, good and respectful individuals. However, the same person can be boor and rude with their own family. In this situation they are not influenced by society, that is why freedom is possible.
Secondly, there is a sport style of clothing which has other social rules and norms. In this regard people are tend to be more free in their activities and speech than in formal dress. That is because sport helps us to relax and allocate our aggressive, stressed and nervous conditions out. Nevertheless, ones face with some restrictions in their preferences of clothing as they should be suited for all members of the society. For instance, it is impossible to do sport being naked because in this case a person may make some inconvenience for others.
Finally, I could not help mentioning the home style of clothes. Such dress gives individuals full freedom not only in their actions, but also in their looks. People do not think much what they can wear because nobody judges them, hence, the main criterion of home clothes is to be suit. In this little world ones can do everything without any restrictions and not fear be ashamed by others since the society rules do not exists there.
All in all, above-mentioned arguments are set out to prove that clothes change people's behavior and make them to act due to norms and rules of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i mean, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86478873239 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6042920032 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566197183099 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1658888558 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8947368421 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155912299406 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499026809063 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330974061683 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942500083387 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320404567213 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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