Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our life consists of responsibilities as well as duties and not all of them fill us with pleasure and joy. In this regard we have to perform activities from time to time even if we do not want to. I absolutely agree with this opinion due to the bellow mentioned reasons.
First of all, doing things that sometimes are necessary can make a person more practical and skilled than they are now. What I mean is that such actions are able to give experience and knowledge that will not only broaden mind, but also make ones an excellent specialist. For example, in university students have to are forced to study some subjects that will be useless for their future profession at first sight. However, the designed education does transform upcoming employees into specialists of wide profile.
Secondly, unwished activities are able to teach a person to solve problems by themselves without hiring someone in this case. Consequently, it is a great chance to save money and be a real man in the eyes of others. In order to prove this point of view, I would like to remember my childhood. When I was younger, I broke my mother's computer. I spent two days reading special books of repairing computers, and as a result, I managed to do that. In fact, I am now able to fix computers and upgrade them.
The last, but not the least, skills, knowledge and experience, that people acquire when they conduct various unwilling deals may help them in their future life. For instance, when I travelled across Europe 3 years ago, my car broke down and nobody was nearby. However, I overcame with this extreme situation because I had experience in repairing cars obtained from my father.
To sum up, I would like to say that useless things are necessary in our life as they are able not only to make people practical, skilled, but also to award them with knowledge and experience that may help save money or solve a problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i mean, in fact, as a result, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69139465875 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59641034321 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587537091988 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2188444097 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119795451865 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340059188723 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473533032743 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064956706397 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230853402805 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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