A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
Nowadays researches have become much more essential. If I were asked what kind of a research center I can recommend for my country, I will advise to construct a building for business research since there will be a lot of benefits from this decision not only for one person, but also for whole country.
First of all, there will be possible to find a solution which will foster to improving our economy. It is not a secret that a small business is an engine of successful economy. For example, if we find opportunities how to make easier registration of own company, there will be more entrepreneurs than now. That is why a new business research center may help solve this problem.
Secondly, business researches are able to make a country richer and wealthier since results of such investigations cost expensive. Studies of business relationships arable to improve trade as a country with a research center not only having new technologies, but also learning how to increase demand on them. For instance, when IBM figured out first computers, company found a lot of customers on domestic market and also on foreign. Sales taxes made the economy of the USA more reliable. Thus, a new center for business research may foster to wealthy of the country.
Thirdly, people should not forget that we live in 21th century when postindustrial economy is outside us. It is not effective to make a research in old spheres such agriculture or farming. In my opinion, people should learn technologies connected with robots, and a business research in this case is able to find solution how to make a production of robots cost-effective.
To sum up, a decision to construct a new center for business research is excellent as everybody will obtain benefits from it. People will be able to have fewer problems if they open their own business, government will have stable, wealthy and progressive economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: kind of
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Message: Did you mean 'constructing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: constructing
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...outside us. It is not effective to make a research in old spheres such agriculture or farm...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'business research'.
Suggestion: business research
...technologies connected with robots, and a business research in this case is able to find solution h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.946875 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87943781134 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6979027549 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363703313267 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125017375372 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116900441478 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216360821059 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083794995747 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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