University plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether building a center for business research is beneficial for the country or not. While some people believe that the country should invest more money to build a center for agriculture research. Personally, I think universities have to concentrate on research that have power in the future such as business research on technology devices.
To begin with, building a business research center to develop some technological devices such as electronic cars or smartphone allows countries to flourish their economic status. They can get more profit by developing new ideas in technology. Currently, people tend to use electronic devices everywhere and for different purposes, so they depend on them all the time. Therefore, when the country invests much money to invent new electronic feature, it will flourish the country budget by doing this great business. For example, in 2000, the government in Japan had improved the economic status in the country by spending much money to develop new electronic devises features. At first, they focused on smartphones; they developed an idea of the camera that allowed people to record all their events by their phone without the need for the real camera. Thus, the government made a least 40 billion dollars from that investment. Another creative idea from one of the research centers in Japan that helped the country to make a lot of money is inventing electronic cars. These cars do not need fuel, they tend to work with electricity. As a result, these new developments allowed the country to improve its economic status.
In conclusion, I encourage universities to invest money on research that benefit the community in the future such as business research on technological elements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: Did you mean 'to fuel'?
Suggestion: to fuel
...electronic cars. These cars do not need fuel, they tend to work with electricity. As...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20138888889 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81650092653 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538194444444 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5761901823 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328621066902 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120793639788 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954028803545 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258983035006 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105234861725 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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