A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
Nowadays significance of researches has become much more essential than it used to be decades ago. If I were asked what kind of a research center I could recommend for my country, I would advise to construct a building for business research since there will be a lot of benefits from this decision not only for single individuals, but also for the whole country.
First of all, finding a solution aimed to improve our economy will be possible. It goes without saying that a small business is the engine of successful economy. For example, if we find opportunities to make registration of own company easier in Russia, there will be more entrepreneurs than now. That is why a new business research center may help solve this problem.
Secondly, business analyzes are able to enrich the economy of the country since the results of such investigations can be sell expensively. For instance, when IBM figured out first computers, the company found a lot of customers on domestic market as well as on foreign ones. Sales taxes made the economy of the USA more reliable. Thus, a new center for business research may foster to wealthy of the country and to improve its trade.
Thirdly, people should not forget that we live in 21th century when postindustrial economy surrounds everyone Making a research in old-fashioned spheres such as agriculture or farming is not effective since people should learn robot-related technologies, and a business research in this case is able to find solution of producing robots cost-effective.
To sum up, a decision to construct a new center for business research is excellent as everybody will obtain benefits from it. People will be able to have fewer problems if they open their own business, government will have stable, wealthy and progressive economy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04362416107 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9223256043 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1647711438 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 5.45110844103 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338123635665 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117596393561 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120708606379 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19476199638 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715459598962 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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