Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It is considered by some people that living alone without parents can make independent from them, while other young adults try to life with their family as long as it possible. I absolutely agree with the first point of view because living alone makes self-assured and separated.
First of all, if you live alone, you will become more independent from your family as there are a lot of issues that you need to solve. For example, when I moved out from my parents, I realized how it is difficult to live without them: I spent much time in order to rent a good flat and found 2 jobs to have money for my costs. Moreover, I was a student and had to go to university, thus I do not have enough spare time on doing what I really want, but all of these made me stronger as I learn to control the time.
Secondly, living alone gives you opportunity for meeting your friends or a girlfriend in your house and you do not need to ask parents for permissions and quarrels with them. To prove my opinion, I can recall how many troubles did I have every time when I wanted to invite my guests. It was awful because I have never got a permission from my parents.
The last, but not the least, parents can proud of you, if they do not need to spend money on your needs as you live alone without them and have a job which gives you a profit. In addition, a distance between parents and their adult children is required because it gives us not only possibility to have a rest from each other, but also time and an opportunity to miss.
In conclusion, I would like to say that young adults have to live alone because they as to become independent from parents and get time to miss and to love each other.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29283489097 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35021489637 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526479750779 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4092698636 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.272727273 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 5.45110844103 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335169669003 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131946371981 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859047668302 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20049803046 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379530268568 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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