Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Not all daily round can bring people pleasure and joy. There are some things that we have to do from time to time even if we do not want. I absolutely agree with this opinion due to the bellow mentioned reasons.
First of all, doing things, that sometimes are necessary, can make a person more practical and skilled than he or she is now. What I mean is that such works are able to give experience and knowledge that will not only broaden mind, but also make one's an excellent specialist. For example, in university students have to study some subjects that will be useless for their future profession at first sight. However, these things make upcoming workers specialists of wide profile.
Secondly, it is a great chance to save money since a person, who did sometimes ago a thing that they do not like, is able to solve a problem by himself. To prove this point of view, I would like to remember my childhood. When I was young, I had broken my mother's computer. I spent two days reading special books of repairing computers, and as a result, I could do that. Now I am able to fix computers and to upgrade them.
The last, but not the least, skills, knowledge and experience, that people get when they do things which do not give them pleasure, may help them in their future life. For instance, when I travelled, my car broke down, nobody were in that place. However, I overcame with this extreme situation because, when I was the teenager, my father always showed me how to repair cars.
To sum up, I would like to say that useless things are necessary in our life as they are able not only to make people practical, skilled, but also to award them with knowledge and experience that may help save money or solve a problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'did'.
Suggestion: sometimes did
...hance to save money since a person, who did sometimes ago a thing that they do not like, is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i mean, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50949367089 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39612554792 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8030103884 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0625 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207859612111 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603443413981 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066706162148 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117695618996 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467583122407 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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