Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
Nowadays selecting friends is becoming more and more essential than it used to be decades ago. Some individuals prefer friends with the same interests, while others opt people who differ from them. This essay will examine both points of view as well as underline its advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, having friends who have the same interests is able to make the life of a person easy. To be precise, one's have opportunity to share their horizons with the people who approve them. That is why, a person does not feel alone with such individuals. What is more, sometimes people have a specific interests which does not suit for some companies of friends since these hobbies require to have a special tastes or education. For example, if one's like going to a theater, a ballet, an opera, it is difficult for them to share their hobbies or have an excellent conversation at the company of people who are fond of football or basketball. Thus, friends who are similar to a person can help realize himself or herself as well as have a specific tastes.
On the other hand, if individuals have friends with different interests, the life becomes more interesting and amazing than it can be. What I mean is that boredom and routine do not exist in such companies because a person always learn something new from friends. In order to prove this point of view, I would like to remember my friends Alex. He has many interests, but none of them cross mine since I am a programmer and Alex is a musician. However, we like listening to each other, changing our opinions and overcomes problems. As a result, I loved the classical music and Alex started to study programming. In other words, different interests are able to make people's life curious and encourage friends to find new hobbies.
Having weighed up all pros and cons, I have arrived to the conclusion that I opt to have friends who are not like me, however, this choice depends on people's character and horizons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, i mean, as a result, as well as, in other words, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73410404624 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59140755131 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537572254335 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6682277058 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3529411765 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385421905282 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120264808816 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996735006319 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237199280794 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488073453699 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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