Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
Nowadays, a prime and fundamental controversy on the issue whether choosing a friend with similarities to us or different from what we are. Some people would claim that finding a friend with the same traits helps us to have a better experience of our relationship. However, as far as I am concerned, I agree that spending time with various personalities assists us to have a diverse range of thoughts in our life for three compelling reasons.
The first and foremost reason that I prefer to illustrate is the suitable impacts of an abnormal and strange individual we can get after a while of connection. A relevant example can shed light on this assertion. 3 years ago, when I was working in a barbershop an unusual person became my colleague. At first glance, I suggested that he must be a mental illness and can't be my friend at all! time passed and I get many important details about the job of hair cutting by him. Nevertheless, I was worried about the differences we had with his appearance, but we could manage to spend a lot of joyful time with each other.
Another reason that should be taken into account is that interaction between a diverse group of people can result in pure creativity which is a vital need for modern life. For instance, according to a recent research study at George Washington university after polling thousands of students from different nations, most believe that diversity in their classmates was a convenient condition for them. Moreover, students at the art and design campus had a strong opinion about the effects that other cultures have on their artworks. Consequently, as the experts of the university demonstrated in the presentation session at the end of the research, most of the students in the aforementioned university have a decision to become more familiar with people from African and Asian countries than others.
To sum up, I firmly believe in differences among people and it's positive influences on our mind for two main reasons. first, any odd person can have his/her impressions on our life. what is more, working with different types of people can lead us to have a more creative society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88555858311 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86774353077 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572207084469 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8786781041 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.533333333 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189068715841 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626084612533 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632630490461 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11752683056 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645344207286 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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