Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
Nowadays living with someone while studying is becoming more and more essential than it used to be decades ago. Many people experience the problem of choosing a roommate who suits for them. This essay will examine integral qualities of cohabitants: cleanliness, humor and kindness.
First of all, cleanliness is one of the most essential quality of a good roommate since, in my opinion, it reflects the order of a person not only external, but also internal. As for its importance, I will not be ashamed to invite my friends to my house as I can be sure that everything is excellent. I find it awful and hideous when rubbish or remains of food are possible to discover in some part of a room. That is why, I mark cleanliness as the first quality which is able to give me possibility to be calm and not to be nervous and stressed.
Secondly, humor is also an integral feature of roommates since it goes without saying that it prolongs the life. To my mind, positive people usually attract more succeed than others and make your life more interesting, amazing and splendid. For example, I am a happy person because my best friend Alex is rewarded this quality. He often tells me funny jokes and sometimes makes with me pranks which we like to recorder on a professional camera. These memories of our activities warm my soul during hard times and give me energy not to give up and achieve my goals. Thus, I could not imagine my roommate without such essential quality.
The last, but not the least, there is kindness. Unfortunately, expressions of this quality are less and less common, that is why I find in it importance. The kindness suggests capacity of a person to forgive others, be polite and courteous with people. What is more, individuals with such quality are often respected by others. For instance, when my friend Alex lived in dorm, his car was stolen. He did was upset since he used to be a driver, consequently, he might to lose his job. As he is respected and loved by many people, they gathered money and bought him a new automobile. That is why, to be kind is integral skill for a cohabitant and it can be rewarded in future.
To sum up, there are a lot essential qualities of roommates, however, the most important for me are cleanliness, humor and kindness.
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also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as for, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65432098765 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69904440969 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5724814904 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6818181818 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.59090909091 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165865503232 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475252960761 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419914113381 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987815853813 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371625834733 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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