Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
During the previous centuries, there had been numerous inventions that each of which had had its own effects on people’s life. One of the most important inventions that change today’s world in many ways is computer unquestionably. In fact, we are living in an age in which computers undoubtedly play significant roles in our modern society. Although some people believe that computers bring tension and stress in their lives, I am in the belief that they have beneficial effects on people’s lives due to providing amusement and making easily accessibility to the information.
First and foremost, making entertainment is a significant merit of using computers. It is crystal-clear that we are living in an age in which people encounter many distressing and unsettling circumstances to the four winds, so considerable need to various recreation day to day is increasing. Moreover, to fulfill such a requirement, we need a wide range of entertainments. In fact, depending upon personal experiences, personality traits, and concerns we find that people enjoy a lot of different amusement. For example, there are a group of people who like going park or cinema for enjoying free time whereas other people prefer stay home and enjoying every their moment by using computer. In fact, in modern society, computers cause a lot of great amusement such as playing game, reading book, watching movies and so on. Hence, you can stay home for days without feeling that time marches and enjoy your spare time. As a result, what has made computers so interesting is the vast range of amusement that they make.
Another subtle point is that, obtaining a wide range of up-dated information can be considered another advantage of using computers. It goes without saying that in today’s society technology is developing so fast that people could not keep up with them unless they keep increasing their knowledge. In fact, computers via the Net have been playing an increasingly important role in galloping rate of people’s literacy. As a matter of fact, today’s life is very different from that of the past. In the past people for getting information and enhancing their knowledge must spend a large percentage of their time in libraries and universities whereas these days not only can you everywhere and every when access to a lot of data with a computer, but also save your time. In fact, with browsing different website you can gain a lot of reliable data but in libraries there are a lot of book which are not up-date so have erroneous information. Hence, computers leave profound impacts on acquiring information as well as improving people’s knowledge.
In a nutshell, the modern society has gone through some changes by the enormous impacts of using computers. Do you can imagine the today’s world without computers? Absolutely you cannot. In fact, nowadays computers have become a part of human's life. Undoubtedly in our modern society no one can turn a blind eye to the numerous effects of computers on people’s lives such as providing entertainment, providing easy access to the plethora of information and so on. Hence, computers open a new window of the globe in front of us as well as revolutionize our world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... numerous inventions that each of which had had its own effects on people's life. ...
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...ent amusement. For example, there are a group of people who like going park or cinema...
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...eliable data but in libraries there are a lot of book which are not up-date so have erroneous...
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Suggestion: Can you
...he enormous impacts of using computers. Do you can imagine the today's world without ...
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268921095008 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.140096618357 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0821256038647 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0450885668277 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0450885668277 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14653784219 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.061191626409 0.0351676179071 174% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05011829851 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0144927536232 0.0309702414327 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00161030595813 0.00188951952338 85% => OK
Determiners: 0.0740740740741 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0144927536232 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0128824476651 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3258.0 2387.08602151 136% => OK
No of words: 532.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12406015038 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34962406015 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276315789474 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214285714286 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176691729323 0.112833075102 157% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05011829851 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486842105263 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.8125946691 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.28 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5699445108 48.84282405 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.32 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.28 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 48.9115789474 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.06993006993 1.45489161554 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229946024694 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0893850641143 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0585960387359 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439242788135 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124791271714 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085476613145 0.114077575197 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519638707722 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.427167065726 0.336927656856 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0297342294375 0.067059652881 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174092827214 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432543110851 0.0618886996521 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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