Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
In today's hectic life, the Internet plays a pivotal role in everyone's life. Controversy exists over whether the immense amount of information which the internet gives us, produces troubles or gives us precious data. In my vantage point, the internet is a useful facility which its information is remarkably helpful because not only is it a wide source of different information, but also it helps you to have access to remote data.
The first aspect to be mentioned is that the internet has a variety of useful information. That is to say, it holds abundant various ideas and opinions which you are able to get familiar with these different concepts only by searching in it while sitting at home. For instance, imagine a person who is studying psychology in the university. He has a lecture about various cultures which exist in the world and wants to find out what are different types of cultures is each country or city. This person can easily be aware of every single country's culture in few hours merely by searching in the internet without visiting that place even once. In addition, he can compare a broad range of cultures with each other and see the pictures to have a better comprehension. Thus, this person can be prosperous in his lessons with the assist of the internet.
Another more subtle reasons is that with the internet, you can have access to untouchable and remote data worldwide. In other words, there are numerous people, addresses, phone numbers and ... in the world which you do not have access to them because they are far from you but you really need them. You can have any information you want from the furthest places by searching the internet. Furthermore, it helps you to realize a disease you have and teach you how to cure it. For example, take the case of a woman with breast cancer. She is not aware of her illness unless she sees the causes of it and searches the meaning of them in the internet, and more importantly, she can find a professional doctor's information from it. Therefore, the internet can save your life and provide essential data needed for living.
All in all, the internet is of paramount facilities and gives us vital and valuable data since it's source is noticeably wide and huge and you can find anything you are willing to, and also, you can get access to some information which are inaccessible as a result of their distance from you. Who can ignore the necessity of the internet in human life?
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Television advertising directed towards young children aged two to five should not be allowed 70
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past 73
- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information Others think access to so much information creates problems Which view do you agree with 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72558139535 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56672100091 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509302325581 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1536542274 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249771424231 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761458621274 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476999520529 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157381024865 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341168954031 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.