In recent years, Internet has become the most popular tool in developed and developing countries alike. Thus, all members of world can take advantages of it. The one of the benefits is providing people with valuable datas, while some people claim that gaining more information can cause to problems. From my point of view, i entirely agree that Internet gives us an opportunity to get a worthwhile information,though it has few adverse consequences.
To begin with, Everyone has a keen interest to learn and explore new things, which takes a long time. Therefore, people started to use Internet without thinking of its cons. This solution has reduced the difficultness of problem. For Instance, before using Internet, people especially students tried to find libraries, where located in a walking distance, and after that they deal with the finding books. It is clearly known that, there are plethora of books,which embrasses academic subjects, literature just to name two. Thus, at least it takes 4 hours to get an few information. Nevertheless, on internet people can find everything, whatever they want just in a million seconds. In addition, the researchers or proffesors or experts update new information in every hours. As a result we have an opportunity to approach a new knowledge.
On the other hands, there are plenty of evidences that force me to agree that accessing to much data leads problems. Furthermost problem is that unreliable informations. In precisely, a person, who is beginner on using internet or uneducated can not distinguish the valid information from incorrect. Likewise, he will find himself in collections of invalid datas. Consequently, a man can addict to bad habitats.For example, he can get an wrong information about drugs, such as using drugs will not kill you, so you can benefit from it.
To sum up, accessing lots of datas can lead to negative consequences, while benefits outweigh the drawbacks of this statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o bad habitats.For example, he can get an wrong information about drugs, such as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, likewise, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17665615142 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05063140006 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634069400631 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0721330227 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3684210526 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1578947368 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269007766247 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668492789897 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715460556065 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141541012415 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638472949311 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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