No one would deny that technological innovations of the recent decades have changed our lives to a great extent, and, in that respect, the Internet is probably the most valuable novelty. Personally, I am prone to believe that the information which has become available thanks to the Internet is valuable in all senses. I hold this opinion since thanks to the Internet more and more people get educated; and it contains information relating to practically all spheres of our lives.
To begin with, because of the Internet the 21st century is fairly regarded as an era of intelligence. Although the quantity and quality of educational institutions increase in all countries, the Internet has become even more valuable framework for getting knowledge and skills. This is particularly explained by the fact that people from the various corners of the world may receive degrees, qualifications, participate in educational programs and so on, without leaving their cities, towns - their homes. For instance, at present my sister in evolved in a master's degree distance program at the Fletcher school of law and diplomacy in the US, but she lives in Armenia and works at her permanent job. She is able to listen to lectures, ask questions to the professors, perform tasks through the Internet. Thus, with the help of the Internet millions of people manage to get education nowadays.
Additionally, the Internet incorporates information relating to practically all spheres of life, and that is one of its major advantages. Facts and analysis on matters like health care, professional occupation, entertainment, and so on, are all available in the World Wide Web. For instance, my wife and my children can find any information which they need and is in the field of their interests in minutes, or even in seconds, again thanks to the Internet. My wife often jokes that the Internet has evolved to a full member of our family. Consequently, it is hard to imagine our lives without the Internet and its databases which provide information on every matter that may interest a person.
To sum up briefly, the Internet is more than a technological invention: it is an indispensable part of our reality which keeps us informed on the issues we are interested in. Moreover, the Internet has provided education and, therefore, a chance to a successful life to millions of people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0641025641 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98739839311 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.547811285 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4375 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156740318886 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567698659564 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038932221558 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975218016916 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144893422006 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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