The Internet plays an important role in our life since we spend a lot of our time searching in that and find the information we want there. If it is asked that information, Which Internet provides people with, is valuable and useful or creates problems, though many think it is harmful, in my view it is very valuable and useful for two significant reasons.
The main reason is that with the Internet people can find what information they want much easier. This means, because of the many searching engines, which are available nowadays, people can access to lots of information and they can search for what they desire easily. For example, last semester my history teacher asked me to bring him an article about Sumer, an ancient civilization in the Middle East, I wondered because, at that time, I hadn't heard that name and that seemed to be baffling. I asked one of my friends to help me. He suggested I search on the Internet, this was the time that everything became straightforward. When I searched the word "Sumer", Google brought me lots of useful information. The only thing, that I had to do, was just simple copying. As you can see I couldn't have prepared that article, if the Internet didn't exist.
Another reason is that people can earn a lot of money by sharing their information on the internet. In other words, when somebody has some useful information he or she can share it easily on the Internet, Absolutely there are many people to pay money for the information they need and this can be good revenue for a person who has that information. For instance, one of my friends is a chemist, when he graduated from university he couldn't find a proper job and he always complained that the field, which he studied in the university, is useless and there is no job for that. One day he came up with the idea that he can share his chemistry information on the Internet and earn from that. After two months he had become one of the richest people in our neighborhood by means of sharing the information on the Internet. As it is obvious, he couldn't have become rich, if there were no Internet.
In sum, in spite of the fact that some may believe that the information on the Internet creates problems, I think those pieces of information are precious and useful. Not only people can find what they want easier, but they can earn money by sharing the information they have on the Internet. In the end, I suggest all of you use the information which is available on the Internet because they are very useful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i think, in my view, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62527716186 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67730256542 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441241685144 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6212421942 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.789473684 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7368421053 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29149660194 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101404683743 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909577646245 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20524477183 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582700787539 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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