Some people say that physical exercise should be done in gym or sport center Other people believe that exercise should done outdoors in open air. Which opinion do you agree with?
From given statement whether to choose indoors or outdoors for exercise is purely depends on one's choice, but I personally think that indoors at gym or sport center is better option than any other. I would choose to go to indoor as it is more safe and surrounded by all kinds of facilities. We can avail all equipments and utilize them according to our need. But its not possible when we go outdoors, we have limited options.
First of all in gym or sport center trainer is always there to train you and help you. Whenever you ask for help he or she will be there to serve you. They are the great helping hands to out daily workouts as they pay attention to our activities. Trainer gives advice and also diet plan for better result. Due to someone's pressure we do exercise with more dedication.
Secondly, If you meet with injury there is medical room available where you can take rest.
In case of sevier injury there are the people who can take you to the doctor. But if you are outside away from home there are very few chances that you will get medical emergency sooner.
similarly, if you pay money to gym or for sport you will do it with more regular and proper as you have invested penny there. Also you will utilize all equipment, which will end up in good physical results on your body. In case of outdoors, you will feel lazy, you will bunk the workout by giving silly reasons.
At last, to sum up i will go with the first point provided by author. It will be more helpful to ourselves to go to sports center rather than going outdoors.If you want do start workout from bottom then gym or sport center is the best option to regulate your body and to set your routine.Also if you are new to start then it will be great help for learning workout pattern or sports as trainers are there to train you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36390532544 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21694782822 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511834319527 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8008509644 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199505623006 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664622340545 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055120866616 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106976739085 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264414684057 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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