Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
It will be great help to student to encourage their own choice of study course.As university require every student to take a variety of courses student can make their choice of subject.They will learn more interestingly as they have made choice of their area if interest.
It will be helpful to fulfill student's interest outside of university syllabus.For example if one is eager to learn robotics but its not part of his/her study course,regardless of that he can pursue his learning by opting these extra courses.
Even it is profitable to university also, as university can utilize that knowledge for university's development and improvement. Veracity in different students will definatly upgrade institution's repute in the educational groups.
Further, It will be helpful for student to think out of box rather than that daily subjects' knowledge.Students will gain knowledge of new subjects which can be used to score more in their regular courses.They could encourage that extra subject and decide path of their career.
Only the thing is they should not neglect their current curricular.They have to maintain balance between extra courses and regular courses. Because of this they can utilize their time effectively and productively rather that wasting it on meaningless things.
Thus it can be concluded that,decision mentioned in the statement will be really good for both university as well as students to increase their level of thinking and plantation students' subjects of interest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ourage their own choice of study course.As university require every student to tak...
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...ourage their own choice of study course.As university require every student to tak...
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...udent can make their choice of subject.They will learn more interestingly as they h...
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...nterestingly as they have made choice of their area if interest. It will be help...
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...interest outside of university syllabus.For example if one is eager to learn roboti...
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...but its not part of his/her study course,regardless of that he can pursue his learning by o...
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...think out of box rather than that daily subjects knowledge.Students will gain knowledge ...
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...ther than that daily subjects knowledge.Students will gain knowledge of new subjects whi...
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... to score more in their regular courses.They could encourage that extra subject and ...
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...ld not neglect their current curricular.They have to maintain balance between extra ...
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...o maintain balance between extra courses and regular courses. Because of this the...
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...that wasting it on meaningless things. Thus it can be concluded that,decision menti...
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...s things. Thus it can be concluded that,decision mentioned in the statement will be real...
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...will be really good for both university as well as students to increase their level of thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, thus, well, for example, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3829787234 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09846265126 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565957446809 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8784529508 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.125 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169799849363 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783908772717 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466125174321 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959743395519 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421896572302 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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