A nation should require all of its students to study same national curriculum until they enter college
Given statement has to be taken positively as same curriculum brings equality in the students as till college students have to learn basics. Although regions, languages or schools are different, like in India there are many languages spoken and many different cultures are established, if the syllabus is identical then there will be equality in the children.
Also for government, it will be easy to manage the education system. The nation like china with higher population in the world, they find difficulties in managing different curriculums, maintaining records and other stuff even though the syllabus of every other board is quite simmilar.
The good point in this will be the poor and rich students will learn same learning in spite of school differences. We often see that rich people's children goes to high standared schools where fees are huge and poor, middle class parents send there children to the schools which is pocket friendly for them. So even though schools are different the syllabus student will learn remains same, this will help to cut down so called "Recisom" among poor and rich.
Another will be the great help for the people who travels a lot. Some people deny opportunities of their career just because their children are studying in the school and they can't change the school as difference in curriculum. Its very difficult to get admission in another school which is having another structure of syllabus.
So considering all above points, statement given implies a strong positive view.
Students should be learning same syllabus all over nation until they start going to the college.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...dia there are many languages spoken and many different cultures are established, if the syllab...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ultures are established, if the syllabus is identical then there will be equalit...
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Suggestion:
...res are established, if the syllabus is identical then there will be equality in...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...here will be equality in the children. Also for government, it will be easy to mana...
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...he people who travels a lot. Some people deny opportunities of their career just ...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ren are studying in the school and they cant change the school as difference in curr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, as to, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 265.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15849056604 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67633644912 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4297955785 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193057463676 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07549174575 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102827840002 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117908989259 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116679236504 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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