Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
Nowadays, we live in a world full of inequality and poverty in every corner of it. I believe that in order to change that, economical growth and jobs play a big role in the situation. Nevertheless, if we can contribute a bit to make the other people to feel better in the meantime, like giving money to a beggar, we should do it.
There are millions of humans around the globe who can barely survive through the day. Poverty is still a big topic that treatens the security and integrity of thousands of inhabitants. The causes of it vary widely, from bad goverments to the lack of education and jobs, from inflation to drug addictions, etc. Many governments from developing countries, all try to fight this issue through strategies of economical growth: bringing investors to provide jobs for the people, exporting national products and offering help to their populations with social programs and education. Also, many organizations like the UN or UNICEF do a big effort to end poverty. Nevertheless, it is something that will be likely to exist within our societies for years to go.
Said so, I believe that the middle and upper class society have the moral responsibility to be compassionate with the rest. Altought, certainly, we cannot change a lot by giving a coin to a person on the street, maybe we can help this entity go through the day, buy some food or water, or get a jacket. There is no way we can know what the situation of a beggar is. Whether he or she lost their job, whether they have left their homes due to physical or psycological abuse, or whether they are heroin addicts and were kicked out of their houses. There may even be inmmigrants who have not been able to find proper jobs. What we do know is that, in most of the cases, the person begging has a disability or lacks of the education and support to seek for help.
In conclusion, even though, in a small scale we cannot change a lot, I think giving money to human that is suffering, changes a lot for him or her.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...I believe that in order to change that, economical growth and jobs play a big role in the ...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... fight this issue through strategies of economical growth: bringing investors to provide j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56111111111 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6706856289 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7122704579 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128202627626 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363707590594 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534664546155 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864970373732 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394233024671 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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