The world is an amalgamation of various classes of people. While the people who are rich enjoy all the luxuries and benefits, the poor and destitute strive very hard to make their living. Unfortunately, in developing countries, it is very common to have a sight of beggars asking for money on streets. If I come across any beggar on the streets or any public places, I would give money to them. Hence, I am in favor to donate money to the people who are begging on the streets.
In the first place, by donating some amount to the beggars, the notion of helping others and caring would be developed in people. For instance, my dad always used to help the poor and needy by giving them some amount of money - for food or medical care. Seeing my dad from childhood helped me in learning the moral value - to help the people who are in need. People need to help and care for each other for the development of the mankind. Hence, if elders donate money to the needy, younger generation learns the values of caring and helping others, which in turn helps for the benefit of the society.
Additionally, giving money to the beggars helps them to save their own lives in many cases. Usually, people ask for money as they are striving for food or healthcare. According to statistics by local Health benefit Organization in our country, around 75% of the beggars are succumbed to death because of lack of food and medical facilities. No country would prefer to leave its people to death, due to lack of basic amenities. The small contributions made by individuals could help the poor to get proper health care and medical benefits which prolongs the lives of the beggars living on the streets. Thus, giving money to beggars would help them to utilize better medical treatments and reduce the death toll.
What's more, helping people who are begging on the streets financially, helps in reducing the poverty. This is an extreme problem in many countries like India. When some beggars get money, they spend some amount for their basic amenities and with the remaining part, they would start small businesses like selling fruits and vegetables. Thus, they could make a living with the money provided and this, in turn, would help to reduce the poverty on the global scale.
To conclude, there are a lot of poor and needy around the world looking out for help. The lack of proper medications, the dearth of food and water has led them to starve and die in many countries. By donating a small amount of money would be beneficial for their well being and betterment of their lives. Moreover, donating a small amount of money would encourage the children to help others and this would improve their social values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in many cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70675105485 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40089471324 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462025316456 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6913842844 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9583333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211462248723 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736089197799 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531852453663 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13495910835 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388651591589 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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