with all the development we have achieved in science and technology, exploring outer space became inevitable.
in my view earth now became with very limited resources , many rivers and lakes have dried and many forests and plants have disappeared, scientists predict that within few decades there won't be enough food or water to satisfy the needs of earth's population. there will be wars on water and food.there. so searching for other planets with new resources will be necessary to save next generations.
Also on earth we know suffer from pollution (air, water..etc) which helped in the spread of many diseases that caused the death of a lot of people.
Now NASA and other space agencies are doing a lot of researches yet if they were more supported by the governments i guess they will expand their experiments and may reach astonishing discoveries in less time.
I think we already spent a lot of many on the earth resources , new generations deserve to live in a healthy atmosphere with fresh resources so that they could enjoy their lives. so the governments should really fund space exploring researches for the sake of the next generations.
flaws:
No. of Words: 195 350
Minimum 250 words wanted. Try this pattern:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2: First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3: Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing as First
Para 4: Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing as First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
An simple example (Eating at home or restaurant) for paragraph 2:
Para 2: First,reason 1 (1 sentence: Eating at home can save money) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences: I can prepare cheaper food from food market; I don't need to drive or take a bus to reach the restaurant; I don't need to pay tips...) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentence: for example, a sandwich can cost me $10 at restaurant, but it only cost me $5 at home.) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences: with the money I saved, I can buy a good book to read; I can use the money for a trip...).
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Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 195 350
No. of Characters: 939 1500
No. of Different Words: 120 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.737 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.815 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.636 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 39 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 26.473 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.486 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.702 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5