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By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the dawn of civilization, humans and animals are a major part of the ecosystem. Vividly, animals' role is to serve and provide the humans since past, however, now the trend is changing. Folks contemplate them as an essential part of their lives. In this regard, their role in humans life is of paramount importance. There are different schools of thought among individuals where some reckon them as a cause of disease spread, others contemplate them as part of the family. If I were asked, I would agree with the notion that pets play a prime role in humans' lives. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first reason corroborating my stance is associated with the notion that pets are good companions, having them at home is like living with a family member. Since they live together with individuals in a home, it's natural to develop interaction and a strong bond with them. People provide for their needs and spend money on their needs. By the way of illustration, my dog, Jack is very dear to me and my family. Last year, when my younger son took him on an evening walk, he got into a car accident. It was a depressive time for our family, we immediately took him to a veterinarian that told us a surgery for him. Though surgery cost $15,000 I was not hesitant to spend my savings on my Jack. As a result, jack got a new life and came back healthy in our lives. My example clearly manifests the importance of jack as a family member in my life.
The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that they are loveable and playful thus, are an important source to release stress. To be more specific, most pets are soft and cuddly, their small actions filled life with happiness such as when an owner came back from work they welcome him/her warmly by giving them a big hug. This is enough to release the stress of the whole work. As a case in mind to shed some light, My brother, Nomi, lives In the United state away from his family. He started to feel depressed by living alone away from family affection. Then, his friend, Rosa gifted him a cat, Kathy. That changes his mood drastically. The last time when I talked to him over the phone, he explained to me how much he feels relax after having Kathy. If my brother had not got a pet, he would out have come out of his anxiety of being alone.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that having pets at home has innumerable advantages. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating. First, they are as important as a family member. Second, they reduce stress and make people cheerful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, thus, such as, as a result, by and large, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49506903353 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44886231871 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528599605523 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9799796924 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5862068966 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4827586207 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10344827586 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229888870334 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049490020204 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114061447662 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237624850747 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.318599720188 0.0645574589148 494% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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