some people think that the reason for success is luck others think it is hard work, what do you think?
We have all met many successful people in our lives, and we might always discuss about the reasons behind their success. Some think hardwork is the only leading way to success while others believe in fortune. Personally, I am of the opinion that hard work is the main key element of prosperity. I feel this way for two key reasons, which I will elaborate on in the subsequent essay.
Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that hark work is the main leading factor of success, which yields outcome. We harvest what we cultivate, that is to say, hardwork is not the only element of success but is the way of success. Success never comes to you unless you strive to meet it. In our lives, nothing comes free or by chance, or even if it happens, it's temporary but not lifelong, and chance can never guarantee our success during the entire course of our lives. Conversely, when we strive, we thrive and assure our prosperity. My best friend is a compelling example of this. His name is Burkan, and he is an athlete with many gold medals, which is the compensation of his success; he never got those medals by luck or fortune but by years of training, hard work, sweatings...Ultimately, all his early mornings and late nights paid off. I think my friends example clearly demonstrates the importance of why hardwork is the sole key to success doors.
Second, Hardwork leads to good luck as Samuel Goldwyn quotes '' the harder I work the luckier I get.'' The profound concept of luck means happiness resulted from success. Success may never happen by itself; it needs perseverance, Determination, self_discipline and hardwork. When we struggle for more, when we are always equipped with sets of goals, when we are always hungry and striving and thriving for more and better, that is when we treuly thrive and succeed and become lucky. Should one do not hard work, he will never get lucky.
To put them all in a nutshell, I firmly recommend hard work since it is the sole element of prosperity and good luck.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, while, i feel, i think, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66477272727 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7032798796 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6038765413 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270324526815 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790827951974 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597656568672 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158527485543 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605117931199 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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