Some people think that traveling is a good thing. Others think that traveling is a bad thing. Which one do you support? Use specific examples to explain your answer
Our planet so astonishing and misterious. At all times, roaming around the world let people to explore new lands and civillisations. I personally think that traveling is a good thing. The reasons why I hold this stance will be elaborated in the paragraphs below.
One of the reasons is that voyaging enables people to enhance intelligence. When people visit new contries they meet new humans, talk to each other and share experience and knowledge. This knowladge individuals can use after coming back home to ameliorate their life by including the new experience in their daily activities. If ancient people had not traveled acrose the regions they lived in, they would have not developed tremendous amount of things, such as agticulture and trade, which eventually brought them to the modern technical progress. Althoug, staying home is more safe than traveling to unknown places, it gives to humans myriad of benefits. To that end, travelling fasilitates humans` evolution and helps them to excel.
The other reason is that journeys bring people together. During the traveling people get familiar with other cultures. This awareness help humans to understand each other in a higher degree and appreciate stiles of life, which are complitely different from their own. Therefore, people are more likely to avoid a variety to national conflicts and this way, increase quality of life on the planet. If an individual is cosmpolitan, he tends to communicate with people from all around the world in a peaceful and friendly maner. Despite on availability of scores of television programs and magazines about traveling and different cultures, it is always better to look at the world with your own eyes. So, traveling contributes to decreasing the numbers of wars on the Earth.
To recapitulate, I feel that voyaging is advantageous for prople. This is because it helps humans to augment their intellectual abilities and live peaceful lives. All things considered, it is reasonable to assume that traveling improves peoples life tremendously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ing improves peoples life tremendously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28220858896 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90987098792 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.853164082 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230347497953 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745731221839 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960001687381 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134918962666 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218224031077 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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