The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today’s world?
It is incredible how the Internet changed humans` life! I personally think that availability of the Internet helps people to become more knowledgable and free. The reasons I hold this stance will be elaborated in the paragraphs below.
To start with, the Internet helps people to enhance their intelligence. The web has a meriad of websites with the tremendous amount of information, where everyone can find avariaty of topics he is interested in. This information can be used by people to learn something new. For exaple, in the Wikipedia students, who are working on their progects, are able to find answers on almost questions they have and perform their work in the best way. On the other hand, if the students do not have the acces to the information, they have insufficient knowledge in the subject. Although the library have scores of books to read, not every facility is capable to provide as mach information to learn as the Internet does. To that end, the availability of the information in the Internet conributes to the increasing of the intellectual abilities of the people.
Secondly, the Internet saves humans` time. A variety of information represented in the Internet gives an opportunity to work with it at home and do not spend time on driving to the library or book stores. The time left people can devoute to their families and enjoable activities. For instance, the students can spend more time on participation in differed kind of sports and stay positive. Dispite the opinion that spending time behind the computer is not healthy, it actually makes people more free from siting for hours with books. So, the information, provided in the Internet lets people to work out this information in a short period of time.
To recapitulate, I feel that the planty of information in the Internet is advattageous for people. This is because it increasses their intelligence and helps to spend more time on enjoable activities. All things considered, it is reasonable to assume that the Internet changed people`s life tremendously.
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...hanged people's life tremendously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, kind of, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07058823529 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01332680078 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502941176471 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9502828849 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234802822789 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849367152076 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736137021233 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159789236635 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244684017848 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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