Internet is regarded as one of the most advanced development in the technology field, where we can search anything we want and can get access to different sites and social media. Personally, I believe that the widespread use of the internet access to information on a level never experienced before. I feel this way for two reasons, which, I will explore on the following essay.
First of all, internet has been accessed to every smartphones, television, computers, and laptops, so we can get internet service anywhere and anytime, we like. We can share different news, events details, and various information to thousands of people in click through different app or websites. People can text each other and pass information regarding any topic they want. My personal experience is compelling example of this. About two months ago, I broke my legs while playing football due to this, I was not able to attend my college. I was going miss a lot of my classes but my friends, who were connected to me through internet send all the notes and assignments of the classes , I missed during that period. Moreover, I was able to watch the videos of lessons which, I missed and thanks to my professor who shared me through internet. As a result, I was able give my body proper rest and also improve my study.
Secondly, due to the availability of information in internet, people are being aware about different bad things such as, impacts of alcohols and drugs . This access has help to convey important message during natural disasters, health hazards, and personal life problems. For instance, when country was suffering from dangerous communicable diseases, internet was able to pass different precautions and safety measures to people. People were aware about all the possible causes and solutions to this hazard.
In the conclusion, I am of the opinion that this availability of information has benefited today's world by big margin. This is because we can share this important information with people and because this information can be helpful during different epidemics and health hazards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0549132948 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79622803093 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56936416185 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6770101445 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23012786058 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855214734345 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991539045927 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159884120431 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540529703485 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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