A man is considred wise when he is creative my his/her mind. Personally, I believe creativeness is key to sucess in life. I feel this way for following reasons which, I will explore on the following essay.
Frist of all, In today's competative world, creativity is keen to sucess whick makes one another different from each other. Though, we read in the same school, get same education by same teacher but there is gap between between a normal student and creative student. The thinking capacity differs in both type of students, which means the opportunity or sucess also differs in life. My personal experience is the compelling example of this. About six month ago, i went for the job interview after completion of my high school. I had a very good academic backhground with good percentage in my highschool but i was not select in the job because of less creativity. However, another candidate with less percentage got the job because he was smart enough to deal the problem by his creativity. Then I finally realized creativity key factor that drags you to sucess.
Secondly, being creative makes to you think things different than what they actually are. It will allow you to stand out of the crowd and be a different one. Thus, being creative will always help in different problems in school or in office. For instance, my little brother was never good at studying course book but he was always creative by his mind. He used involve in making his on science invention. As a result, he was highly reconginzed by teachers and students in my school. Additionally, he also got full scholarship due to his creativity.
Lastly, being confident means being more confident and more social. Usally, the more who is smart always posses good personality so, he is always ready to deal the problems in life. To be more specific, being creative allows you to learn other different skills in your life. People will consider you as an example, they will follow your principles.
In conlcusion, I am of the opinion that creativity is thing that leads to sucess in life. This is because creavity makes you different warrior of life and also because it opens the door of opportuinties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83466666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68573184729 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9903494376 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5416666667 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12355697538 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359409511523 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545966347396 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063023142366 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649946426813 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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