The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world?
With the advent of technological advanced society, the internet enjoys a high popularity among people. however, when it comes to the choice between the internet and the public transportation, people get into a dilemma. From my point of view, I cling to an unshakeable idea that, the governments should spend more money to improve internet access for it could be of vital importance to people's further development.
To begin with, more access to internet means more access to knowledge. On contemporary society, people are highly exposed to the diversified informations on the internet. we can never deny that, there are numerous amount of useful informations and knowledge that could help us to promote our academic level as well as broaden our horizons. For example, many famous academic journals, such as IEEE, Science and Nature, are published through the internet in electronic forms, which does a great favor to the researchers and scientists, because they could efficiently browse the latest publications in seconds. Moreover, the access to the internet can not only do good to the researchers but help children's education. Imagine in the class, the teacher don't have to waste strength to write on the blackboard. Instead, they can collect quantities of newest educational videos and materials, and directly send them to the students' laptop. Hardly can we make the education so elegant without internet.
On top of that, another obvious advantage of the internet is that it could largely improve people's mental health, giving people more opportunities to communicate with others. With so many social communication website and applications, such as Wechat, Facebook and Instagram, people are more exposed to other's daily lives. people can share their moods, funny experiences through the internet. Undoubtedly, such a convenience would become a strong stimulation to those who are shy or scared of talking to others. I can think of no better illustration of my cousin's own experience. my cousin Yang was very shy and always nervous when in the public. he was never willing to talk, so no one wants to make friends with him. but when he first used sina weibo, a famous social communication application in china, he was impressed by the colorful life of others. To our surprise, he gradually became outgoing and happy to share his life in sina weibo. And even more, he just found his girl friend, who was his online friend before. Thus, the access to the internet would definitely helps people in mental health.
Admittedly, improving public transportation also has certain merits that deserves more words here. because it could bring more convenience to people's journey. however, nowadays, almost every family own their private cars, meanwhile, the freeway, bus lanes and high speed trains are more than developed in china, which means there is not much need for the investment in the public transportation.
All in all, due to the above mentioned reasons, I reinforce my point that internet access is more worthy of being invested. only via internet can we pursue a better future of human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2611.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18055555556 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82143624561 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 810.9 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3023315246 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7037037037 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167116721402 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463503953565 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425623285286 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863584947441 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491845233937 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.